Wednesday, February 22, 2017

THE END




















Dear death, Please take me away
Take me into the darkness, do it today.

This is the one and only answer for me
Breaking all the shackles, I need to be free.

All through my life, I got treated like a pest
Here I go, leaving out all the rest.

Being alive, no peace I could find
So, ending my life is all over my mind.

When I'm gone, don't say how much you loved me
I was all alone in my darkest days, where blackout was all I could see.

All they knew was how to deceive
So, when I'm gone, no need to grieve.

A rusted blade against my wrist
A shattered glass and a bleeding fist.

Now I see how bad life hurts
Out of my wrist as the blood squirts.

Tired of the intense, unending fight
I took my own life that night.

Time to turn off the light
As I'm gone forever, Goodbye, Goodnight!





24 comments:

Anonymous said...

beautiful poem. Very deep and intruding . Keep writing.
Love , yang

KatrinaJeanCarter said...

Vee, this was very thought-provoking and I can resonate with the deep dark emotions as I have been there a couple times in my life.. I just hope this isn't something you are going through right now but if it is always remember I am here for you!

pospi otuson said...

my heart melts down after reading this, its touching. really gonna pass this on, and as katrina said; we hope it isnt what you're currently going through?

Freya Farrington said...

very deep, thought provoking and serious words, I feel more probably relate to words like these, truthful honest and touching

Miss Kim said...

Beautifully written. It's powerful and deep. Quite some talent you got. I admire writers that are good with poetry, as it was not my forte as an English major.

Elizabeth O. said...

This is such a deep poem, very emotional as well. You can see the heartbreak and sadness in each line, like a cry for help.

Shirely said...

Oh very deep poem, so heart touching and close to my heart. Thanks for sharing.

Veethee Dixit said...

Haha! No Kat, I'm fine. This poem was just imagination. That's all!

Veethee Dixit said...

The poem is totally imaginary! :)

Nina said...

Wow what a deep, dark but true poem. So many people feel this way when they take their own life.

Kathryn Maher said...

Well written poem. I like that you have tackled the controversial issue of self harming and suicide. Well done!

nadine cathleen said...

Ok, now that you have clarified that you are fine and not suicidal in the comments above, I will now only comment on the poem :)

The poem is truly beautifully written and quite morbid (in a 'good' way). You should make a song text of it, will be a very melancholic song though but a great one.

ana de jesus said...

This is so sad , it makes me think of the person I used to be who wanted to give up but knew that was the right outcome. Beautifully written x

Alison Rost said...

What a beautiful and sad poem all at the same time. It reminds me of times in my life when I've felt sad .. but knew I needed to keep going because it was the right thing to do

Irma said...

The poem is beautiful, although it is a sad one. But what I liked most is how you succeeded to make it so real. true, and picturesque. One can actually imagine the sequence of scenes while reading it. It's great!

Leticia Curteis-lateo said...

That was so good! Really powerful and touching ☺️ Thank you for sharing with an important message

Carola K said...

It's a beautiful poem. It's very sad for someone to feel that way. But it's written down very well, it's very touching.

Mihir said...

It's an wonderful poem very heart touching too. the message behind the poem is something we can speak

Blair Villanueva said...

beautiful po and it is well written. Though a bit heartbreaking still its warming. Poems will makes us understand the true feeling just like the songs.

Dailydosesofbeauty said...

This is so touching. Beautiful written. Love reading this types of poems.Thanks for sharing

leXHansplaCE said...

poem o poem, thanks veethee, this was well written and the fact it has some nice words inbetween lines makes it a favorite for me already. good stuff.

SveetesKapes said...

Beautifully written poem. It is so deep and thought provoking, thanks for sharing.

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Surekha said...

omg! very touching poem, heartbreaking too. I might have been difficult to write it for you, I hope you are doing fine

Swapnil said...

Wonderful, very heart touching and heart breaking poem. Thanks for sharing this.

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