Friday, July 29, 2016

BEAUTIFUL LOVE

I felt like a marvelous blessing from above
when you walked into my life, my one true love.

You are my 
sky, you are my sea,
you are my everything and you mean the world to me.

The way your affection takes me on a daily trip to paradise,
every day, every moment makes me aware that your love comes without a price.

My soul is filled with your love when I think about you with full devotion,
you give me a reason to live each day, as my heart races with a sweet emotion!

In the canopy of your arms I always want to be,
enclosed by your hug and the way it completes me.

The way you hold me tightly, I know I can count on you,
you are at my constant beck and call when I don't know what to do.

You are always by my side through it all,
you are always there to catch me whenever I fall.

You gave me your shoulder to cry on when I felt cringing pain,
you showed me rays of sunshine when all I saw was rain.

I am grateful to you, for you made my dream come true,
you have opened my heart and soul to the wonders they can do.

When you cross my mind, I see my face glow,
can't express my feelings with words so how much I love you, you will never know.

Life without you is a scary dark night and you are my shining star,
don't leave my hand ever and stay with me as you are.

In the darkness of my life, be the shining 
flame,
promise me we will stay intact and you will always be the same.

It is the way we capture each other's soul and mind
and that is what makes our magnificent love one of a kind. 

So here I am feeling stronger than ever,
knowing that our beautiful love is going to last
ALWAYS AND FOREVER.





60 comments:

Joanna Davis said...

This is a very beautiful poem and I can read the love you are feeling for your other half through the lines. It's beautiful when we can express ourselves through art and create poetry, or paintings, or music, inspired from our feelings.

Miss Piggy said...

Such a lovely poem. I can feel your overflowing emotions while reading this. When I was young I also make poems about love and heartache and it's the best way I can heal myself and feel overjoyed.

Veethee Dixit said...

Thnxx Joanna😍

Veethee Dixit said...

thnkuu😍

theresa said...

This poem reminded me that I have to check the poems my students created. Definitely one poem for keeps.

Veethee Dixit said...

glad i cud help!😊

John Penyah said...

Awwee, your poem is so full of love and compassion. I'm happy you have found your one true love :) Wish you guys more happiness in your road to forever!

Veethee Dixit said...

Thnx a lot John!! 😊

Zwitsy Y said...

You got an awesome poem here. Just by reading it, I see how deep is your love for this person. I just hope he was able to read it.

Veethee Dixit said...

that's true😊

Kristine Redillas said...

You truly love this person just like the universe. I hope the person will get to know how you feel about them.

Veethee Dixit said...

he knows.. 😊

Dorothy Torretijo said...

Wow! What a great poem indeed! Before I use to write romantic poems hihi. Keep posting!

Veethee Dixit said...

thnxx Dorothy!😊

Sam said...

Very romantic poem. I also keep a blog of poems, but hidden in secret. It takes vulnerability to write about someone in the open. Lots to learn from Taylor swift haha

ROBERT LEE said...

Beautiful poem. It is what one person wants the most in a relationship isn't it? What makes it work is if works both ways. Imagine, a love that last.

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Veethee Dixit said...

I agree :)

Veethee Dixit said...

Thnx Robert! It's the best feeling indeed. :)

Dawn Flores said...

Aw. It actually made me tear up a little bit. Such a beautiful poem. Love it! I used to write poems in high school, but they were really bad. Ha-ha! I agree with every last word. I can relate to how you feel towards your man. Let's keep being in love!

Nya said...

This is so beautiful, and this is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend (I know...how cheesy of me). The feeling of knowing that will be 'forever' is a tricky one, and I thought I'd never be 100% sure...but when it happens, it happens. And when it's real, it's real. My doubts are long gone now.

Veethee Dixit said...

thnxx Dawn!😊

Veethee Dixit said...

gud to know that there are cheesy peopl like me.. lol.. but it's awsm!!😊

Nimi Popat said...

Having someone special in our life is beautiful but when two people feel the same about each other in a same way is a real special blessing. You are really lucky and this poem is azing. Touched my heart. Your better half must have felt so incredibly special when he read it.
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Nimi Popat said...

Having someone special in our life is beautiful but when two people feel the same about each other in a same way is a real special blessing. You are really lucky and this poem is azing. Touched my heart. Your better half must have felt so incredibly special when he read it.
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Carola Conmose said...

Beautiful poem! Sounds very great. You describe it very beautiful. It's amazing you found someone special and that you're very happy.

Mr. X said...

I love the words. It's beautiful and powerful, how it should be. I'm a romantic and passionate so I can understand, and what you describe is what I feel for the very first time to my girlfriend. Every wrong things I was given myself are finally all gone and she brought everything I wish, dreamt for and even more. Inspiring words there

Jennifer Yang said...

The love shared with this poem is exactly how God loves us. :) Truly a love that will last forever. A love that lights the path through darkness and that which gives care and hope. It made me remember that I wouldn't be able to love Sev, my family and my friends, and feel loved if God didn't love me first. :') Amazing poem! Thank you for such a beautiful poem.

Sabine Zaalberg said...

Beautiful poem this is! To share your love in words is beautiful. I'm getting married soon so this was inspiring to read. Lovely background too! So pink and sweet!

nevermychoice said...

Awee this is so beautiful. I wish I were good with words like you are. I wish I knew how to write poems like this one, and prose too. You could be the next Lang Leav! :) Also, I'm lovin your blog... it's pink!! XD

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Bernadette Angelie Pangilinan said...

That's such a beautiful poem! Reminds me of my highschool days, I used to write poems about my crush too! Haha!

Veethee Dixit said...

thnx nimi! I am lucky indeed :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnx Carola :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnku :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnx Sabine! wishing u a prosperous married life ahead! :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnkuu soo much! I love to write so word just come through.. :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnx Bernadette :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnx Bernadette :)

Veethee Dixit said...

thnkuu soo much! I love to write so word just come through.. :)

Unknown said...

Beautifully written Veethee.I feel overwhelmed reading this post. I want to shout out loud and tell the world that these beautiful lines are written for me by the most beautiful girl in this world... :*

CreebHills said...

Awww i just want to say you are an amazing composer, good job
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CreebHills said...

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berlin domingo said...

YOu spoke of words that are so dear and tender. One could feel the sincere love and emotions. I compose poems before especially on days I felt so emotionally attached. But your words here are so beautiful i would easily think mine are just too amateur or perhaps needing more inspiration.

Gabrielle Crystal RoseBonniee said...

Yaaay, this is a really beautifully written ♥ You surely have a talent for that! Κ••͡α΄₯•Κ”

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Love 30 said...

Oh I love this. You gave such a beautiful way with words. This has made me feel warm inside πŸ˜„ Ree love30

Laveena Sengar said...

What a beautifully written poem. I respect people who can make such beautiful meaningful thoughts with a peom. Loved it.

Lavender said...

Beautiful poem, it's very well written.

Chrissie M said...

Being a poet myself, I love reading other poets works. This is a beautifully written poem and I wish you and your love continual happiness and joy. Great writing!

Hatsuharu said...

What a lovely poem. I do right poems as well and all I can say is that you were able to express how thankful and happy you are that you have met your significant other. Way to go!

Thuymi Do said...

Good job, this is so lovely. I wish I could write such words, just can't...

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Anne Klien said...

What a nice poem full of emotion and your love is so deep. This person is so lucky to have you!

Anonymous said...

What a lovely poem I hope the person whom you have written this one for knows exactly how you feel about him

Gabrielle Crystal RoseBonniee said...

I would like to write poems like this. It´s so beautiful ♥ And I wouldn´t complain about receiving one like this either :) Κ••͡α΄₯•Κ”

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Ruxandra said...

Such an emotional and beautiful poem <3

Anonymous said...

This is such a beautiful poem :)

Jaya said...

Great words. Love it! Keep it up.

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leXHansplaCE said...

this is such a beauty for me as i got so moved and emotional reading through this. thanks for the share...

lindaikejisboy POSPI said...

wow. Lovely inspirational poem really enjoyed reading this

Blair Villanueva said...

Your poem is so beautiful, full of emotions and love. I like it a lot :D

EG III said...

One can only hope and pray to experience a love like this at some point in life. Beautifully written and expressed.

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