Friday, July 29, 2016

BEAUTIFUL LOVE

I felt like a marvelous blessing from above
when you walked into my life, my one true love.

You are my 
sky, you are my sea,
you are my everything and you mean the world to me.

The way your affection takes me on a daily trip to paradise,
every day, every moment makes me aware that your love comes without a price.

My soul is filled with your love when I think about you with full devotion,
you give me a reason to live each day, as my heart races with a sweet emotion!

In the canopy of your arms I always want to be,
enclosed by your hug and the way it completes me.

The way you hold me tightly, I know I can count on you,
you are at my constant beck and call when I don't know what to do.

You are always by my side through it all,
you are always there to catch me whenever I fall.

You gave me your shoulder to cry on when I felt cringing pain,
you showed me rays of sunshine when all I saw was rain.

I am grateful to you, for you made my dream come true,
you have opened my heart and soul to the wonders they can do.

When you cross my mind, I see my face glow,
can't express my feelings with words so how much I love you, you will never know.

Life without you is a scary dark night and you are my shining star,
don't leave my hand ever and stay with me as you are.

In the darkness of my life, be the shining 
flame,
promise me we will stay intact and you will always be the same.

It is the way we capture each other's soul and mind
and that is what makes our magnificent love one of a kind. 

So here I am feeling stronger than ever,
knowing that our beautiful love is going to last
ALWAYS AND FOREVER.





60 comments:

  1. This is a very beautiful poem and I can read the love you are feeling for your other half through the lines. It's beautiful when we can express ourselves through art and create poetry, or paintings, or music, inspired from our feelings.

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  2. Such a lovely poem. I can feel your overflowing emotions while reading this. When I was young I also make poems about love and heartache and it's the best way I can heal myself and feel overjoyed.

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  3. This poem reminded me that I have to check the poems my students created. Definitely one poem for keeps.

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  4. Awwee, your poem is so full of love and compassion. I'm happy you have found your one true love :) Wish you guys more happiness in your road to forever!

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  5. You got an awesome poem here. Just by reading it, I see how deep is your love for this person. I just hope he was able to read it.

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  6. You truly love this person just like the universe. I hope the person will get to know how you feel about them.

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  7. Wow! What a great poem indeed! Before I use to write romantic poems hihi. Keep posting!

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  8. Very romantic poem. I also keep a blog of poems, but hidden in secret. It takes vulnerability to write about someone in the open. Lots to learn from Taylor swift haha

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  9. Beautiful poem. It is what one person wants the most in a relationship isn't it? What makes it work is if works both ways. Imagine, a love that last.

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  10. Thnx Robert! It's the best feeling indeed. :)

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  11. Aw. It actually made me tear up a little bit. Such a beautiful poem. Love it! I used to write poems in high school, but they were really bad. Ha-ha! I agree with every last word. I can relate to how you feel towards your man. Let's keep being in love!

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  12. This is so beautiful, and this is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend (I know...how cheesy of me). The feeling of knowing that will be 'forever' is a tricky one, and I thought I'd never be 100% sure...but when it happens, it happens. And when it's real, it's real. My doubts are long gone now.

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    1. gud to know that there are cheesy peopl like me.. lol.. but it's awsm!!😊

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  13. Having someone special in our life is beautiful but when two people feel the same about each other in a same way is a real special blessing. You are really lucky and this poem is azing. Touched my heart. Your better half must have felt so incredibly special when he read it.
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  14. Having someone special in our life is beautiful but when two people feel the same about each other in a same way is a real special blessing. You are really lucky and this poem is azing. Touched my heart. Your better half must have felt so incredibly special when he read it.
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  15. Beautiful poem! Sounds very great. You describe it very beautiful. It's amazing you found someone special and that you're very happy.

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  16. I love the words. It's beautiful and powerful, how it should be. I'm a romantic and passionate so I can understand, and what you describe is what I feel for the very first time to my girlfriend. Every wrong things I was given myself are finally all gone and she brought everything I wish, dreamt for and even more. Inspiring words there

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  17. The love shared with this poem is exactly how God loves us. :) Truly a love that will last forever. A love that lights the path through darkness and that which gives care and hope. It made me remember that I wouldn't be able to love Sev, my family and my friends, and feel loved if God didn't love me first. :') Amazing poem! Thank you for such a beautiful poem.

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  18. Beautiful poem this is! To share your love in words is beautiful. I'm getting married soon so this was inspiring to read. Lovely background too! So pink and sweet!

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    1. thnx Sabine! wishing u a prosperous married life ahead! :)

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  19. Awee this is so beautiful. I wish I were good with words like you are. I wish I knew how to write poems like this one, and prose too. You could be the next Lang Leav! :) Also, I'm lovin your blog... it's pink!! XD

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    1. thnkuu soo much! I love to write so word just come through.. :)

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    2. thnkuu soo much! I love to write so word just come through.. :)

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  20. That's such a beautiful poem! Reminds me of my highschool days, I used to write poems about my crush too! Haha!

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  21. Beautifully written Veethee.I feel overwhelmed reading this post. I want to shout out loud and tell the world that these beautiful lines are written for me by the most beautiful girl in this world... :*

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  22. YOu spoke of words that are so dear and tender. One could feel the sincere love and emotions. I compose poems before especially on days I felt so emotionally attached. But your words here are so beautiful i would easily think mine are just too amateur or perhaps needing more inspiration.

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  23. Yaaay, this is a really beautifully written ♥ You surely have a talent for that! Κ••͡α΄₯•Κ”

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  24. Oh I love this. You gave such a beautiful way with words. This has made me feel warm inside πŸ˜„ Ree love30

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  25. What a beautifully written poem. I respect people who can make such beautiful meaningful thoughts with a peom. Loved it.

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  26. Beautiful poem, it's very well written.

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  27. Being a poet myself, I love reading other poets works. This is a beautifully written poem and I wish you and your love continual happiness and joy. Great writing!

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  28. What a lovely poem. I do right poems as well and all I can say is that you were able to express how thankful and happy you are that you have met your significant other. Way to go!

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  29. Good job, this is so lovely. I wish I could write such words, just can't...

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  30. What a nice poem full of emotion and your love is so deep. This person is so lucky to have you!

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  31. What a lovely poem I hope the person whom you have written this one for knows exactly how you feel about him

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  32. I would like to write poems like this. It´s so beautiful ♥ And I wouldn´t complain about receiving one like this either :) Κ••͡α΄₯•Κ”

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  33. Such an emotional and beautiful poem <3

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  34. This is such a beautiful poem :)

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  35. Great words. Love it! Keep it up.

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  36. this is such a beauty for me as i got so moved and emotional reading through this. thanks for the share...

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  37. wow. Lovely inspirational poem really enjoyed reading this

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  38. Your poem is so beautiful, full of emotions and love. I like it a lot :D

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  39. One can only hope and pray to experience a love like this at some point in life. Beautifully written and expressed.

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